New template for Ninja Story Engine-Feedback please

Narutosanmikey · **Joined:** Sun Jul 30, 2006 4:00 pm **Posts:** 926

Hey guys I just finished animating a walking sequence for my sprite and I wanted some feedback on it.

Thanks in advance,
Mikey

Blodyavenger · **Joined:** Sat Mar 08, 2008 6:59 am **Posts:** 524

I think that looks realy fine. Maybe when it moves back right leg, everything goes too fast. Maybe additional frame there would improve it (now it looks like one of his legs are damaged)

bakekitsune · **Posted:** Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:44 am

AHAHAHAHA!!!!

The artwork is good, but seriously you try walking with your left arm forward and your left leg forward at the same time. Classic mistake.

Hitoki · **Posted:** Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:20 am

Walking needs work...it kinda reminds me of something Nitemare did:

Kyori · **Posted:** Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:39 am

It looks kinda freaky the the head doesn't move at all, sorta like he's being held off the floor by his head, but yeah cool sprite.

thedarktiger · **Posted:** Sun Aug 24, 2008 10:35 am

do you know how easy it is to steal it even with SIG on it?

Ima steal it =)

grenadier42 · **Posted:** Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:22 pm

NOEZ THEY BE STEALIN' MAH (PENISH) SPRITE!

Narutosanmikey · **Joined:** Sun Jul 30, 2006 4:00 pm **Posts:** 926

Thanks for the advice guys! Yea I just noticed it looks like there's a dent in the right leg.

@bakekitsune-I did base it off of realistic movements. I actually walk like that so I'm not sure what you mean.
@hitoki-Can you please be a bit more specific about what needs work please?
@kyori-Thanks for the advice i'll get to work on it right now.

Again everyone thanks for the advice, I really appreciate everyone taking the time to give feedback.

Nitemare60 · **Posted:** Mon Aug 25, 2008 3:56 pm

looks like a monkey head

Sephiroth187 · **Posted:** Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:45 pm

Narutosanmikey wrote:

@bakekitsune-I did base it off of realistic movements. I actually walk like that so I'm not sure what you mean.

Sorry but... thats unusual in itself.

I tried walking like how you drew it, but I didn't last long.

bakekitsune · **Posted:** Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:57 pm

I pity the man who never learned how to walk.

Anyway 99.9% people walk like this.

Hikaru · **Joined:** Mon Apr 21, 2008 10:48 pm **Posts:** 134

I posted an awesome complete template for NSE a while ago, but no one paid attention to it, and now the image links are broken, and I'm too lazy to go re-upload them..

Narutosanmikey · **Joined:** Sun Jul 30, 2006 4:00 pm **Posts:** 926

Crap. You're right bakekitsune. Sorry about that. The visual representation helped me out. Thanks for the info.

Nitemare60 · **Posted:** Wed Aug 27, 2008 10:31 am

the head still looks like a monkey head

Narutosanmikey · **Joined:** Sun Jul 30, 2006 4:00 pm **Posts:** 926

lol. well at least i'm trying. geeze. XD

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New template for Ninja Story Engine-Feedback please