Haha ok man, i guess i just got a bit disappointed when i saw "Most Epic Hip Hop Nerd Beat" as the title. I was mostly being tongue in cheek (which is why i said pro tip), but when i look back on it i guess i was being a bit harsh.
But just hear me out for a sec k? you can't just lay down a rhythm and then randomly chuck other sounds over the top. The drums set the pattern of your song, whats the point in having drums if no-one or nothing else pays attention to it?
With your song, if you go 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 and 1 ( basic 4 / 4 ). For some reason your sounds will come something like 2/3 between "and - 2". There's no release on the 4th bar, or the 4th beat for that matter. The strobing aswell, should have been on the beat, but only the first was on beat, and then when it looped it was off beat. Also the sounds needed to be sped up or slowed down in order to match the timing of the hip hop beat you set up. This is called a train-wreck, where you mix two tracks together without them being in sync. This is also why i mentioned musicality.
Hmmm when i read it, i was actually considering trying it out, and perhaps i should to back up what i said. But i got over remixing stuff like 2 years ago, and ceebs looking for all my hardware. And yeh i do have a blackbelt jones remix somewhere but seeing as it was done 2 years ago, i don't think ill ever find it.