vbGore Free Online RPG Engine

hey just want to know what people think of my idea for a concept of the screen...

i suck at drawing but hopefully you get the general idea.

it will feature the races (with in their best class), and a layout (basic) of the land you will be playing in.

It will be animated (wind and lightning) and light up the title and sub title (light from behind)

i just need opinions on this idea and here is what i have drawn



Before you get here you will see the logo of my company and the others that are helping me.

Yeah it looks alright I suppose, it's a generic login screen really (username, password, buttons, title) the only thing that would make it stand out is the background, which is just a drawing atm so I can't really comment on that.

Maybe think about adding a news section? Somewhere in that empty space, you could make it semi-transparent so you can see the background.

i was thinking of a news or announcement area there... but that would be semi transparent, i really just wanted people to comment on the graphic idea behind it.

eg. whether or not my placing of things is apropriate lol i really can't spell xD

Is the castle going to have "Not to scale" written on it in the finished version?

It's not really a detailed enough image to really comment on, I assume it's just a draft by the roughness of it. I guess it might look good when it's finished.

ill have a colour one soon enough, a friend of mine is drawing it.

and when i drew the castle i realised how big that would actually look compared to the town... um, anyone like a building as big as a mountain? xD

but yeh it was just a quick sketch for my friend to go off... which is why i wanted to know abut my placements of everything, colour one will come soon enough, then the finished digitised one.

The concept it self looks good, but will you be able to actually make a working image? I can imagine this coming out pretty well if you're good.

Me... lol im hopeless with computer drawings.

when i get a graphics tablet then i can easily make a working image. Use new layers for characters, and lightning copy the full pic into an animation program and do it frame by frame... shouldn't be too hard after i get the base image.

Wait, so you're saying you're going to buy a graphics tablet for several hundred dollars, develop the skills to draw a recognizable and complicated image, and an top of that, animate it?

Looks awesome, especially the line texture, and the border on the right side. =D